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PostSubject: Three Oneshots   Three Oneshots EmptyJanuary 10th 2010, 9:04 pm

Here's a small, brief oneshot I made for Kingdom Hearts. I was applying for the parts of Fuu(jin), Riku and Zexion on my forum, and as an example to others, and I thought it was pretty good. So I posted it on fanfiction.
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Sorry Is Just a Word ~ Fuu(jin)
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Seifer leaned against the wall and watched Rai torment Vivi, Fuu observing from her position next to Rai, with a certain sense of satisfaction. How dare that shrimp enter in the Struggle contest against him, how ungrateful, after everything they'd done for him. "How dare you, y'know!" he snorted as Rai pushed the hat wearing boy to the ground.

Fuu, less commonly known by her full name, Fuujin, wasn't as pleased with this as Seifer was. Her crimson eyes watched as Rai stood over the downed Vivi, outwardly she looked detached and uncaring, inwardly she was pondering the benefit of all of this. She looked at Rai. "Wrong?"

The muscled teen laughed at the question. "Nah, Fuu. He deserves this, y'know."

She shrugged. Honestly, she didn't. Vivi had never really done anything to Seifer by entering the competition, they all knew that he'd never win, so what was the problem. Sometimes she had to wonder what exactly was going on in the minds of her 'friends'.

Fuu watched as Rai left Vivi on the ground, unconscious and obviously hurt. "Come on, Fuu!" Rai called as he and Seifer left the Sandlot, she waved at them.

"Later." she yelled back. "Busy."

They shrugged and walked off, assuming she was going to have her own 'fun' with the downed kid.

Little did they know that she took him back to his house, gently setting him down on his doorstep for his mother to find.

"Sorry."

Fuujin knocked on the door and walked off.
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Another Bad Day ~ Riku
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Riku smirked at his cinnamon haired friend. "Come on Sora, you can do better than that!" he teased, easily blocking his thrust.

"Shut up, Riku," Sora yelled back, punctuated by another furious swing.

Ah, baiting Sora was such great fun at times. The silver-haired teen twirled nimbly around to block a strike to his back. "Sometimes I wonder why I considered you as a rival," he sighed mockingly, brushing a silver strand of hair away from his face.

Way to Dawn hummed warningly in his hands and his senses screamed at him to move, but it was a fraction too late. He fell forward as a rough blow to the back of his knee made it buckle under his weight. With a grunt of pained displeasure Riku shifted his fall into a roll, cushioning the impact as he flipped back to his feet again, only for his leg to buckle once more. He cursed.

Before Riku could fully comprehend what had happened he was on his back, with Oblivion pressed tightly against his neck, Sora standing over him with a frustrated glare.

"I told you, you could do better," he remarked, pushing the blade away from him.

Sora rolled his eyes.

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Camisado ~ Zexion
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Zexion gazed up at the redhead with a carefully blank expression. "Number Eight," he sighed and snapped his book shut, "I insist you leave my Library, lest you suffer the consequences."

A thin eyebrow rose. "And what consequences would that be?" he snarled.

Slate colored hair shifted slightly away as he lifted his head, revealing a thin scar. "Well you see, Number Eight, I have certain...connections within this organization." a dangerous glint entered his violet eyes. "I can make things a whole lot harder for you than need be. Maybe something involving your little blonde friend." he smirked inwardly as Axel tensed at the mention of his wayward friend. "For you see, my title isn't the Cloaked Schemer for nothing. As you'll find out, if you do not leave."

Axel stared at him for a moment, his brow furrowed. His superior, ever serious, would probably follow through with that.

"Now, Number Eight."

With a grunt a dark portal was formed and the spiky haired man was gone, no sign he'd ever been there other than the pile of books that now lay scattered across the floor. Zexion sighed and stood, gathering up his precious books and returning them back to there neat, tidy stack.

"Child." he muttered scathingly to himself.
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Last edited by Fireflight on January 11th 2010, 3:34 pm; edited 1 time in total (Reason for editing : Apparently 'may' is the new 'man'.)
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PostSubject: Re: Three Oneshots   Three Oneshots EmptyJanuary 11th 2010, 1:28 pm

Aw, I want to read them right now, but I have to leave.

I'll tell you in my next post.

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PostSubject: Re: Three Oneshots   Three Oneshots EmptyJanuary 11th 2010, 3:31 pm

Okay. That's fine.
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PostSubject: Re: Three Oneshots   Three Oneshots EmptyJanuary 11th 2010, 6:08 pm

Your writing's excellent, if only I knew more about KH...

But I know enough to tell you I like them, especially the last one.

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