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PostSubject: Shiki.   Shiki. EmptyOctober 26th 2009, 2:25 am

(Noticed this hasn't been used in awhile.)

So, my OC Shiki. I need some critisim.
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Shiki is usually a calm, composed person. She has long black hair and icy blue eyes, which carefully conceal her emotions. She has a sense of humour, like all people, but it rarely ever makes an appearance.

Shiki also has an obsession with the wonderfully sweet treat, chocolate. She loves Pocky especially.

Gradually (although looking back on it, it was too fast) Shiki will defrost ever so slightly in regards to those around her, but certain things will still set her off.

She is an Ookami (wolf) hanyou in almost all stories, because hanyou's rule.

Her parents are high-ranking Ookami demons, however they look down on her because her older brother is seeminly perfect to them, whereas Shiki chose to leave the demon realm and her family and friends to begin anew on earth, where she was quickly recruited into the Organization.

She is in posession of the second strongest elemental sword; her sword is ice-based and has the name, Tsukiko (may change). The strongest elemental sword is in the posession of her brother, it is a fire based sword, who's name I have yet to create.

Shiki loses all sembalance of composure in the prescence of her brother. Her brother was always the favorite, the child who could do no wrong, no matter how much it should have been the other way round. Her brother has an aura around him that demands respect and loyalty of Ookami members, this is the famed Alpha gene. Shiki can't help but obey it's influence, not that she would try to ignore it anyway.

The Alpha gene is passed down in the main house of the Ookami clan, within all those who have a chance to lead the demons.
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PostSubject: Re: Shiki.   Shiki. EmptyOctober 26th 2009, 1:31 pm

(Yup, one of the most dead forums here).

I think she's a great character, because of her personality.

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PostSubject: Re: Shiki.   Shiki. EmptyOctober 27th 2009, 12:33 am

I like her, one of my best OC's yet. I'm working on fixing a few flaws in her character though.
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PostSubject: Re: Shiki.   Shiki. EmptyOctober 27th 2009, 12:01 pm

And what are those flaws?

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PostSubject: Re: Shiki.   Shiki. EmptyOctober 27th 2009, 8:24 pm

Well, she goes from being closed and cut off one minute, to being friendly and happy the next. That I must not do.
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PostSubject: Re: Shiki.   Shiki. EmptyOctober 27th 2009, 9:00 pm

Like, a less variable attitude or one that doesn't change as easily?

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PostSubject: Re: Shiki.   Shiki. EmptyOctober 27th 2009, 9:04 pm

One that changes gradually through the story, rather than semi-instantly.
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PostSubject: Re: Shiki.   Shiki. EmptyOctober 28th 2009, 4:49 pm

More like character growth, right?

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PostSubject: Re: Shiki.   Shiki. EmptyOctober 28th 2009, 8:21 pm

*Nods* That too. Lol.
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PostSubject: Re: Shiki.   Shiki. EmptyOctober 28th 2009, 8:52 pm

I'd love to read one of your fics.

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PostSubject: Re: Shiki.   Shiki. EmptyOctober 28th 2009, 8:53 pm

Sure, as soon as I add her into one.
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PostSubject: Re: Shiki.   Shiki. EmptyOctober 28th 2009, 8:57 pm

Fireflight wrote:
She is an Ookami (wolf) hanyou in almost all stories.

This made me think you had.

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PostSubject: Re: Shiki.   Shiki. EmptyOctober 28th 2009, 8:58 pm

Well, I do have her in many stories, none of which I've posted on Fanfiction. I'm in the midst of two stories revolving around her.
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PostSubject: Re: Shiki.   Shiki. EmptyOctober 28th 2009, 9:03 pm

Ah, OK. Tell me if you do post them.

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PostSubject: Re: Shiki.   Shiki. EmptyOctober 28th 2009, 9:05 pm

I will, but they're fanfiction. Naruto fanfiction to be exact.
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PostSubject: Re: Shiki.   Shiki. EmptyOctober 28th 2009, 9:35 pm

Both of them are Naruto?

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PostSubject: Re: Shiki.   Shiki. EmptyOctober 28th 2009, 9:37 pm

Yeah, the current ones.
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PostSubject: Re: Shiki.   Shiki. EmptyOctober 28th 2009, 9:44 pm

*Gives up*

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PostSubject: Re: Shiki.   Shiki. EmptyOctober 28th 2009, 9:46 pm

*Grins* What's the matter?
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PostSubject: Re: Shiki.   Shiki. EmptyOctober 28th 2009, 9:56 pm

I barely know a few things about Naruto.

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PostSubject: Re: Shiki.   Shiki. EmptyOctober 28th 2009, 9:56 pm

Ah. It's pretty self-explanatory.
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PostSubject: Re: Shiki.   Shiki. EmptyOctober 28th 2009, 10:01 pm

I'll try my best then.

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PostSubject: Re: Shiki.   Shiki. EmptyOctober 28th 2009, 10:02 pm

Of course you will, I would expect no less. Heck, I'll even write you a guide when the time comes.
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PostSubject: Re: Shiki.   Shiki. EmptyOctober 28th 2009, 10:06 pm

Hehe, thank you.

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PostSubject: Re: Shiki.   Shiki. EmptyOctober 28th 2009, 10:07 pm

But of course.

Oh, I also write numerous AU's or AH's, so don't worry.
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