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PostSubject: Here goes nothing.   Here goes nothing. EmptySeptember 29th 2008, 2:51 am

This is a story i originally wrote for fanfiction. It revolves around the plotline of kingdom hearts and focuses on the organization. It's quite... raw... so if you're not the person for that stuff, don't read it. Sorry.
For those knowing the lingo, this story involves yaoi / zemyx. So please, if you're not the person for it, click that pretty little 'back' button.



Larxene stood in front of the superior. “Can we do it? Please?” Xemnas surveyed the blueprints in front of him. “I don’t know, Larxene. It’d take a lot of manpower.” Larxene was at a loss for words. It was an ingenious plan. She fished around in her pockets for something to bribe Xemnas with. She found something, and pulled it out. It may have been covered in dust and paperclips, but it worked. “You want the cookie, Xemmy? Come on. Come on…”


After coaxing Xemnas to the Twilight Town mall, Larxene called the rest of the group. An array of portal appeared over the courtyard, eventually revealing eleven members of the organization. Xemnas walked over to Axel, whispering in his ear. “Fine then…” He summoned a flame under Xemnas’ cookie and watched as the chocolate chips began to moisten. Xemnas took the cookie away and began to munch on it. Larxene began to address the organization that wasn’t distracted by a combination of sugar and chocolate. “Right. We are going to use heartless to kill everyone in there then we start crashing this whole damn mall.”
Roxas began to jump up and down in the back. “OOH! OOHOOHOOHOOH!” Larxene turned to Roxas. “Shut. The hell up.” “Right. Cool.”
She raised her hand towards the doors, various war cries running through her head.


Larxene, who was using her kunai claws to hijack an electric horsey ride, had a huge grin on her face. She had begun a reign of control over the organization. She had overcome the leader of the grim group and become the instructor of those idiots. She charged electricity through her claws and the machine began to move. “Roxas!” He bounded towards her, full of energy. “Sit on it.” “WHY?” She twiddled her kunai between her fingers. Roxas trembled and climbed up onto the horsey. It began to move rapidly. Lexaeus approached Larxene. “How long would it take for it to heat up and explode, making Roxas hurtle through the air and land in that convenient weapons stand over there?” “Half an hour? But frankly, I care more about the weapons stall.” She wandered towards the stall with a smile upon her face.


“So… many… different… flavours…” Demyx stared at the candy display in front of him. Zexion, who was in the bookshop next door, walked over after hearing Demyx’s moaning. “What are you talking about, you idiot?” He saw the display. Zexion was instantly inspired. He picked up a small box of Tic Tacs. He smacked Demyx over the face, instantly sending him reeling. Demyx tripped and fell over. Zexion approached Demyx, who was lying on the floor. He opened the miniscule box of breath mints. Zexion ripped open the top of the box and poured the white pods into Demyx’s mouth. Demyx, who had been quietly concussed, reached up and grabbed the back of Zexion’s head, who was leaning over him. Demyx pulled the blue-haired teenager towards him and locked lips. Zexion discretely replied with his own embrace. Demyx leant to the side and spat out a few of the Tic Tacs filling his mouth. Zexion got off Demyx and beckoned him towards the bathrooms.


Marluxia washed his hands. Maybe he’d get some privacy with Larxene later on, maybe not. He disliked the latter. He strode over to the swing door, before he was smacked in the face with it. He crumpled against the wall. His nose bled ferociously. He saw through tear-strewn eyes two cloaks leaning against the wall, hoods clashing with the other. “L-Larxene?” One cloak looked at him and sniggered. He saw the character in the hood and gagged in amazement. Thought he’d never get kissed. There’s the matter of who the bastard’s making out with, though. “LARXENE?” The other cloak turned around and shook his head. Marluxia couldn’t see his face. He slowly walked out the door in search for his girlfriend.


Xemnas stared at the mess in the purple-carpeted specialist confectionery store. There was a mix of saliva and used Tic Tacs down one aisle. He jumped over the debris and resumed his hunt for more cookies.


“Hey, Saix!” Larxene had taken over the weapons stall, on one side of the pit. Vexen had taken over a cellphone stall on the other side of the pit. The pit was a large gap on the top floor that was surrounded by a glass barrier. Xaldin had commandeered a gun stall on the other side of the pit. Saix, who had virtually all attacks directed at him, had appropriated a cake stall. Saix went berserk, to be exact. He threw cakes in every direction, usually hitting the glass protecting the other fighters. Larxene, who had been coming second, due to that Vexen was very good at dismantling electrical things, decided to kick things up. She felt electricity course through her body and she touched the metal rim of the glass barrier. It began to crackle with heat and electricity. It had began to run along metal posts holding up the glass, but Saix, in all his intelligence, was leaning against the rim when Larxene attacked it with her electric feel. He ripped his head back (as he was leaning his forehead against the rim). But it was too late. He was unconscious. Xaldin flagged down Luxord, who was walking past, and told him to begin fighting.


Axel wandered down the hall. This place was big. He lit a cigarette and looked around. Roxas, who was on a mechanical horse, was playing with a lighter. “It broked.” Axel grinned. “Come on… I have a project for you…” Roxas put away his lighter and locked eyes with Axel. “Does it involve what?” “Sure, why not?”


Lexaeus was bored. He wondered how Xemnas agreed to this stupid plan. He knew that the heartless sent into the mall made a hell of a lot of progress in killing everyone, but there wasn’t a real reason. He stepped onto the escalator. It immediately sped up. Lexaeus fell onto his back and felt scratches slide through his back. He looked for aid frantically. There wasn’t any. He reluctantly gave up and watched the ceiling pass over him.

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PostSubject: Re: Here goes nothing.   Here goes nothing. EmptySeptember 29th 2008, 7:13 am

Great writing, even though I don't fully understand [Never played KH].

If you'd like to post a Mature story, use the Mature Forum [Made it visible to you now].

And there's another double-post, you can double-post in your story only if it's to add a new part or chapter to it.

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PostSubject: Re: Here goes nothing.   Here goes nothing. EmptySeptember 29th 2008, 2:48 pm

okay. i forget sometimes. I was laying in bed all night thinking: i shouldn't have done that... shouldn't of... grr...
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PostSubject: Re: Here goes nothing.   Here goes nothing. EmptyOctober 11th 2008, 8:23 pm

one day sonic was running.... THE END Confused
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PostSubject: Re: Here goes nothing.   Here goes nothing. EmptyOctober 11th 2008, 9:21 pm

SX10, that is a so Spammy message. Please post related to the topic.

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PostSubject: Re: Here goes nothing.   Here goes nothing. EmptyOctober 11th 2008, 11:49 pm

that's a nice word... spammy...
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PostSubject: Re: Here goes nothing.   Here goes nothing. EmptyOctober 11th 2008, 11:57 pm

Indeed, though I prefered to read this on Fanfic cause then I can send you pretty reviews!
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PostSubject: Re: Here goes nothing.   Here goes nothing. EmptyOctober 12th 2008, 12:25 am

i can't see how at all you forgot your password for it. something involving pocky, maybe. or perhaps your MSN password?
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PostSubject: Re: Here goes nothing.   Here goes nothing. EmptyOctober 12th 2008, 12:34 am

Oh that, I found have my password now but I've moved on to another account, I've posted another 6 stories, not all about KH.

I also have 5 reviews.
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PostSubject: Re: Here goes nothing.   Here goes nothing. EmptyOctober 12th 2008, 12:38 am

another account! come on...

i have found a word for my condition: Hematolagnia. The pure and most likely insane fetish for blood. Sounds a bit like a word for a love of bloody tomatoes. Ew.
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PostSubject: Re: Here goes nothing.   Here goes nothing. EmptyOctober 12th 2008, 12:39 am

HAHAHA I HAVE MANY MANY ACCOUNTS!!!!

Ahem, judging by your fetish I say you would make a good murderer.
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PostSubject: Re: Here goes nothing.   Here goes nothing. EmptyOctober 12th 2008, 1:01 am

what? i have a blood fetish. sue me. (Deja vu. Huh.)
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PostSubject: Re: Here goes nothing.   Here goes nothing. EmptyOctober 12th 2008, 1:12 am

What ever, just don't get caught.
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